EnglishYear 4Writing

Edit to improve vocabulary and grammar

Assess and edit writing for effectiveness of vocabulary choices, grammar, and consistency of tense and subject

What you'll learn

  1. 1

    Imagine you wrote 'The cat sat on the mat.' Now let's make it sound better by swapping boring words for interesting ones! 🐱

  2. 2

    Which word sounds more interesting than 'sat'? 🐱

  3. 3

    Tap the boring word to replace it with a better one! 🐱

  4. 4

    Let's make this sentence better together: 'The dog ran fast.' 🐕

  5. 5

    Which sentence sounds best? 🐕

  6. 6

    Now you try! Improve this sentence: 'The girl ate her lunch.' 🍎

  7. 7

    What did you change 'ate' to? 🍎

Practise Edit to improve vocabulary and grammar with Whizlo

Free AI-tutored lessons, unlimited practice questions, and progress tracking for ages 8–9. Aligned to the UK National Curriculum.