English LiteratureYears 10–11Essay Technique

Embedding quotations

Embed short quotations fluently within analytical sentences rather than bolt-on quotation blocks

What you'll learn

  1. 1

    Imagine you're telling a friend about a book. You want to use the author's exact words, not just your own. That's embedding a quotation!

  2. 2

    When you embed a quotation, what do you do with the author's words?

  3. 3

    Let's embed this quote from 'Macbeth': 'Is this a dagger which I see before me?'

  4. 4

    Drag the words to build an embedded quote. Start with 'The narrator says,' then add the quote 'It was a dark and stormy night.'

  5. 5

    Which sentence has the quote EMBEDDED (woven in)?

  6. 6

    A common mistake is putting a comma before every quote. Sometimes you don't need one! If the quote flows naturally, just add it.

  7. 7

    Which embedded quote is punctuated correctly?

Practise Embedding quotations with Whizlo

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